Showing posts with label language features. Show all posts
Showing posts with label language features. Show all posts

Thursday, 10 October 2013

Poetry - Write Colour Poems lesson plan

Hello friends,
This next poetry unit on Colour Poetry compliments this art unit I wrote for inquiring into the Element of Colour
This is part of a series on the elements of art which also includes Element of Line HERE and Element of Texture HERE

Colour Poetry is a fun way to explore metaphors and abstract thinking. By comparing colour to objects, actions and ideas, children extend their thinking to encompass poetic concepts.

This unit supports quality writing with graphic organisers in both US and UK spelling, that makes it easy to create quality imagery.

Each student will create a unique poem because they relate these images to their personal lives and experiences. For this reason, it can also work well when combined with portraiture art, like these lessons available HERE



 
Writing frameworks are provided and teacher models with a poem exemplar are all there to guide you through.

 You can grab your very own copy of Colours Poetry over at my TPT store - One Teacher's Journey HERE

What other teachers have said about Metaphor Poems about Colour/Color!
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Sunday, 6 October 2013

Writing Feelings Poetry about Emotions with Elementary Students

Hello friends,

Poetry is one of my favourite writing genres to teach. But how can we support students to write quality poetry? And something that is new and different from the same old, same old.
My secret is this.
When you find a poem you like, analyse it. What has the author done? There is always a pattern that is identifiable.
Over the years I have had great success by using this method and I am always impressed by the strength and variety that my students deliver.

Poetry is a great way to start the year because it really looks closely at language choices. Also its a  fun way to close out the year as well.

I have started compiling my poetry strategies into units that make it easy-peasy for you too.


Emotion Poems is my first unit.  This is one type of poetry I have used when exploring feelings and emotions with my students. It's a great way to help children understand that we need to talk about our feelings, to own them and to understand them, when you address the topic through writing. 
To understand that we all have feelings and we may not feel the same about things or experiences as someone else, is helpful.

Emotion poems pair an emotion with a colour and then analyse it through the senses, using similes. All steps are clearly laid out and student graphic organisers have been created to make it easier for younger students. 
Of course UK and US spelling has been accommodated where needed on these. Share the presentation up on on your large screen, so that your students to follow easily .
Perhaps even model the process by writing your own poem, alongside your students. 
This 28 page unit is available from my TPT store - One Teacher's Journey - HERE



Many teachers have enjoyed using this resource and I hope your enjoy writing poetry with your students too :)

⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ "I was amazed at the depth and quality of work that students produced when I used this. Amazing! The best result was the pride they had in what they achieved!"

⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ "After teaching my poetry unit, I felt that I need an assessment piece that would demonstrate what students had learnt. I explicitly taught each and step of the feeling poem template and all students produced a wonderful poem that I made into a class book. This is such a wonderful resource."


Thank you for visiting,
Timea

Tuesday, 30 April 2013

Body Systems #8 - Collaborating on writing

Hello Friends,

In post #7 I said I would write about  how we use our class Google Drive for collaboration and moderation. This is something I started using last term, when our school server "died'. I wanted some way that students could write on-line and access for collaboration and moderation. Enter our class Google account.
Now there are probably snazzier ways that people are using the internet for this purpose but as a starting point, this was perfect for me and my Y4 kiddies last year. This Year I am repeating it with my Y6's and so far so good. The only difference of course is that last year we were a digital class (12 iMacs- 1:2) and this year we are 1:3 with variable devices (iMac, windows laptops, iPads).
P.S. I still like to think that we are a digital class because its about mindset really, not the hardware you have.





Anyhow...this is how we did it:
Step 1) Open a Google account for the class. Make it something generic that can move with you if you should change rooms or levels.

Step 2) Make the password something relevant to you and your students.

Step 3) Agree on a set of user etiquette with your students on the appropriate use of this shared drive.

Step 4) Create folders as required and teach your students a few basics, they'll soon figure out the rest.



Home Folders: I created a class 2013 HOME folder first and tasked each student to log in, open the Home folder and create their own Home folder inside this one. They had to name their personal folders as follows:
e.g. name_home2013, and finally assign a colour to it.
This is where they file away completed or personal work.

Work Folders: next I created a folder for our current theme - Who we are-Body Systems. Within that there are 3 folders - draft (red), peer review(orange) and teacher chat(green).  As students prepare to type up a paragraph from their research notes, they create a new document each time. Again the naming convention is important: e.g. name_1_intro, name_2_heart. This way its clear to see at a glance whether a student is keeping up with the pace, or needs a little extra support. 


Once they are happy with their paragraph, they move it to the peer review folder. They then set up appointments with other kiddies (also in that orange folder) for a peer review. I require them to have 3 collaborative sessions, before posting into the teacher chat folder.


As work appears here, I call students for a teacher conference about their paragraph. Following this the final work is filed into the group folder for that body system. Once the work has been used in the presentation, it is filed away in the student's Home folder.


Teacher Chat: I copy and paste the student's work below in the same document. I work with or without the student in the copy only, leaving the original work untouched. Great thing is that I can easily access this drive from anywhere, even my iPhone and edit work if we are backed up.


Notice the Peer Reviewers names below the student's paragraph.


 I have a marking code that I use as follows. This document also sits inside our drive for reference. The student then pastes a 3rd copy beneath mine and makes the edits suggested. This way there is a very clear trail of evidence to show progress. They can use this to talk to when sharing their learning at parent evenings

Here are our rules for using the drive:
 And here are the process steps that we had for reference:


Once all the editing is completed, then comes the fun part of creating a presentation, the brain can switch fully into creative mode as it no longer needs to worry about elements of handwriting, accurate copying, spelling, etc.

I'll post about the presentation options next term when we get to that, lots of hard work researching, writing and editing first -  haha :D

Would love to hear about how you use Google Drive with your kiddies.
'Til next time :)


Tuesday, 9 April 2013

Body Systems #2 - Non-Fiction Text Features plus Freebies

Hello Friends,

As promised, this next post is about two awesome non-fiction resources that I used. They are:
Non-Fiction Text Features Posters
Created by Primary Punch. You can get it free on TPT
http://www.teacherspayteachers.com/Product/Non-Fiction-Text-Features-Posters
Another is http://www.scholastic.com/teachers/top_teaching/2011/03/my-march-top-ten-list-nonfiction-reading-resources#morehttp://www.scholastic.com/teachers/top_teaching/2011/03/my-march-top-ten-list-nonfiction-reading-resources#more

Both resources are free and were God sent for this unit.A huge thank you to the creators - it will save many teachers hours of prep time. We shared the cards around and students looked at them in pairs. They read and discussed the feature on their card and then had 30 sec to share their feature back to the class.

Next, I distributed the following sheet for their Inquiry books and we headed for the school library.


In pairs again, the kiddies selected non-fiction books from the shelves and delved in, hunting for the text features we had shared about earlier. Such a valuable lesson as many children today think that you find information in Google as your first port of call. I believe they looked at Non-fiction books through new eyes today! We will be referencing our learning from today quite often in the days to come,  I think.
You can grab your free copy of the Text Feature scavenger hunt (HERE).
That's all for tonight. Stay tuned for part 3 coming soon :)

Classroom Freebies Manic Monday



Yours in teaching


Sunday, 7 April 2013

Body Systems #1

Hello friends,

Recently we made a start on our second inquiry unit for the year: "Who We Are" - Body Systems. Our central idea is that our bodies are made up of complex systems that interconnect to meet our body's changing needs. As its my first time teaching this unit, I took the time to compile the knowledge I needed  and reflect on how best to release this to my 10-11 year olds.


My lovely team member, who is a Mimio guru, made the most amazing interactive mimio book on the topic for our kiddies but when it came time to use it, we quickly realised it wasn't going to work quite as we had hoped. Having both just traded Digital classrooms of 2012 for regular classroom in 2013, we were at a loss how to open the Mimio content to the students, without the equipment we had been used to, previously.
(Images: Philip Martin)


In the end, my beloved Wikispaces came to the rescue again. Many hours of work (in the wee hours of the morning) later, I had all the links transferred to our team wiki page so that our kiddies could access them from anywhere and any computer. Phew! Turns out there are quite a few out there.
This screenshot is just of the 'general' body system sites. There are around this many for each body system too! Well that should keep them exploring for sometime. There is vast range from videos, inter-actives and diagrams to games, 3D models and experiments. Something for everybody.

This is our first look at Non-fiction text in depth this year so one of the first things we did in reading is update our Reading Strategy Focus to "Finding Information". This cute poster is from my resource which you can grab (HERE on TPT) and (HERE on TN), internationally. If you are in New Zealand you can grab it (HERE at HML). It is up on our CRAFT reading wall and my kiddies also all have a copy in their Inquiry Journals.
I am feeling so excited about this new unit that I am giving away this Find Information poster (from the above resource) for FREE!!!. Grab it here!
And because its Manic Monday

Classroom Freebies Manic Monday

 
 We had a really good discussion about what each line meant in order for them to make links to their prior learning, and they were already automatically signalling the verbs (e.g. identify, find, use) and key words in each (something we have been working on for comprehension all term). YAY!

In my next post,  I'll share about the cool free resources I found on line for teaching non-fiction text features and how we used them. So stay tuned :)

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Yours in teaching









Wednesday, 20 March 2013

5W and 1H

Hello friends,

Today, for writing, I pulled out a section from my resource

Reading Comprehension Skills and Figurative Language Posters


It's the Who, What, Why, Where, When & How questions. I printed them in greyscale for my students, reducing to 2-1 as well. We make envelopes to keep them in and made our own tool kits for buddy conferencing.

Then we got together with a buddy to share our narratives. Students read 1 paragraph at a time, while their buddy held the question prompts ready to ask expanding questions of the writer. After taking turns with this activity, the kiddies regrouped and shared the results of their expanded sentences back to their table groups. What a difference!

This was a follow up to a great little digital motivator called "I made tea." Take your students through it by clicking onto each 'greyed out' word. It will blow their minds how you can expand 1 short, dull sentence into an entire paragraph.

(Here) is the link to the digital motivator and I added some images of our tool-kits, too :)

 

 

Saturday, 2 March 2013

Narrative Writing Posters

Hello Friends,

We are hard at work writing our first Narratives this year. The motivational text that I used for this is
Alexander and the terrible, horrible, no good, very bad day by Judith Viorst

You can preview the book on Youtube and the HBO cartoon is also there.

First, we shared the story and discussed why we may have a strong  personal connections to the events that Alexander experiences throughout his day.  We also looked at why the character kept wanting to go to Australia and why would the author keep repeating this concept as a link through the story.

For home-learning, students discussed their own unlucky, unfortunate or 'bad day' experiences with their families, that they have had over the years, and made a list in their Learning Journals, to bring to school.

In class we used these to create a time-line for our stories. We talked about how author's write from personal experiences in order to connect with their reader about  relate-able topics. Also how authors may modify the circumstances or details of these events to fit a story idea or message. My kiddies had to adapt experiences that happened over several years to a timeline that would fit 'Yesterday' - Our Very Bad Day'.

So far we have written the Orientation and half of the sequence of events. They are sounding amazing so far :)

I created this support material for Writing Narratives, both for myself - to refresh the features in my mind - and also to share with the students as they edit their draft work.


I have included descriptions and examples of the following supporting concepts:
Purpose of Narrative Text
Types of Narrative Text
Features of Narrative Text
Structure
Plan a Narrative Text
Language
Use of the Senses
Imagery
Rhetorical Questions
Vary Sentence Openers
Personal Voice

Hope you find it useful too. You can grab it from HERE or HERE

Will share the results soon :)


Saturday, 12 January 2013

Writing Cinquain Poems - Templates

Hello teacher friends,

Last term there was an afternoon when many of our teachers had to attend union meetings, so we had to double up some classes for the afternoon sessions. I planned a poetry lesson for my group and made this student guide to go with it. Being term 4, it was a great way to revise some of the learning we had done during our water unit (Sharing the Planet - IB), as well as language features.
I took it as a guided lesson for the first poem and as an independent for the second (9 yr olds). This lesson went really well. You can grab your copy by clicking on the image below. We worked through the first booklet (water poems) but I have also added a blank booklet so that you can use this for any theme you are working on.

The Water Cinquain Template is available from my TPT store - One Teacher's Journey - HERE
or grab it free by registering on my website to access my FREE resource bank  at - Help Me Learn - HERE


Enjoy :)

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